Writing

SPEECHES

The Legendary Learners have been writing speeches for the first half of this term. We have been learning how to use emotive language to help make our speeches more persuasive. We have also been learning how to group our ideas into paragraphs in order to make our speeches easier to listen to. Our teacher was super impressed with what we have all achieved. Please watch our speeches and leave some positive comments.











































STORYBIRD

Our first genre of writing for the year was cameo writing. We learnt about using verbs, adjectives and nouns to make our writing more interesting to read. We also learned about alliteration, metaphors and similes. We went through the process of watching a video on the Amazon rainforest. Then we brainstormed our ideas and turned these into a plan. Next was the draft version where we were able to edit and make changes to ensure that it was interesting to read. Finally we published our work by creating picture books online using Storybird. Please click on the following links to read our awesome books.

Kyla
http://storybird.com/books/the-amazon-15/?token=5hw8b3w8bm
Sophie
http://storybird.com/books/the-amazing-amazon-rainforest/?token=uvnr6jx3p4
Hayley
http://storybird.com/books/the-amazon-14/?token=n3msrg86vd
Tyler
http://storybird.com/books/the-amazon-13/?token=xk9cccvfsw
Chloe
http://storybird.com/books/the-rainforest-48/?token=3kaypdtdch
Vincent
http://storybird.com/books/the-amazon-12/?token=9zeyx8atx4
Ashlee
http://storybird.com/books/the-amazon-11/?token=d8bk8h28ze
Jack
http://storybird.com/books/the-amazon-rainforest-2/?token=v3bdgcuzx4
Leon
http://storybird.com/books/the-amazon-10/?token=3jqhc9ap94
Ella
http://storybird.com/books/the-amazing-amazon-rainforrest/?token=3ckxhndx4q
James
http://storybird.com/books/the-rainforest-47/?token=wjr9h8v77a
Bianca
http://storybird.com/books/the-rainforest-46/?token=mnjr8enjht
Aidan
http://storybird.com/books/the-amazon-rain-forest-4/?token=8bk2gb8yzb
Liana
http://storybird.com/books/the-amazon-rain-forest-3/?token=dnnsbjve3j
Corey
http://storybird.com/books/the-amazon-rain-forest-2/?token=bpn97u86a8
Ethan
http://storybird.com/books/amazonian-jungle/?token=w42fg7k24a
Jorja
http://storybird.com/books/the-rainforest-danger/?token=gtr7jhvggn
Grace
https://storybird.com/books/graces-shopping/?token=uwyfvp38pw

1 comment:

  1. These are amazing! Well done legendary learners! From Leon's mum

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